by ChaoticBrain » Tue Sep 13, 2011 2:04 am
Lethal Interjection wrote:ChaoticBrain wrote:Well, this is currently true metaphorically, at any rate...
There's something about this sentence that isn't quite right. It might be that you used "true" and "metaphorically" together. It might be that you added "currently" to that. Or it might be that they are all lumped together in a rather declarative statement.
"Figuratively speaking, the TSA is fucking Americans in the ass, and has been doing so for the past 10 years."
Better?
[quote="Lethal Interjection"][quote="ChaoticBrain"]Well, this is currently true metaphorically, at any rate...[/quote]
There's something about this sentence that isn't quite right. It might be that you used "true" and "metaphorically" together. It might be that you added "currently" to that. Or it might be that they are all lumped together in a rather declarative statement.[/quote]
"Figuratively speaking, the TSA is fucking Americans in the ass, and has been doing so for the past 10 years."
Better?