The Bound and The Broken: PFE Saga (Chapter 1)

[GUTCHUCKER]

I can't wait that long, tell me now!

[Apocalyptus]

PINK.

Just like my pasty caucasian skin. Thanks for reminding me, you jerk!

That was a test. You guys passed.

[GUTCHUCKER]

Yayyyyyyyyy

[Apocalyptus]

One gold star for you!

[Kimra]

*after I read Kovvy, and Smiley, and Apocalyptus' storys of course.

But I never wrote any! That I've posted here at any rate...

Anyway wolvenreign, it's an interesting start but I suggest you get your tenses sorted out. It's distracting when you keep forgetting whether you're using past or present tense.

Clearly I meant Carbon, but since we're all one it's hard to tell us apart at times.

[Apocalyptus]

Oh, darn. But surely the hive should be able to tell themselves apart! You hurt me, Kimra.

[Kimra]

Oh, darn. But surely the hive should be able to tell themselves apart! You hurt me, Kimra.

I just thought you were so awesome that of course you had a story as well. It wasn't a slight at all. Please forgive me! I can feel your pain too.

[Apocalyptus]

Well obviously I'm not as awesome as you thought, because I've been too lazy to write any stories lately.
But I forgive you, Kimra.

[carbonstealer]

And I also forgive the parts of myself so that we are in a beautiful hive mind of forgiveness

[Kimra]

I love our hive mind. I don't know how other people survive without one.

[Felstaff]

I was thinking exactly the same thing.

[Crunchy Pete]

i read the story and i did not like it.

Sorry.

[GUTCHUCKER]

I only just read it. It is odd.
I thought it was okay.

[Kimra]

You read it? I am extremely disappointed. : (

[GUTCHUCKER]

Only cuz someone else said they did :X