Michelle's Bad Day (discussion)

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Actually Oldrac goes next, I was filling in for Kimra.
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Oh snap crackle damn.

Now my dramatic unveil might not work a'tall. We'll have to wait and see. Tune in next week mole-kidies!
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That's okay, you can go before me. I've written one already.
Police said they spent some time working out if they could charge the man with being armed with a weapon, as technically he was armed with part of a fish.

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Yay! Oldrac you are my favorite crab person/thing. Now to step up and put text to my boasting.

And it is done. :D
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PLOT TWIST

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Not just a plot twist, an open ended one. There's a few ways that whole thing can be taken.
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I'm going to go ahead and make the suggestion that it is The Father i.e. Gawd. Of Molepeople*.

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Ooooh I like that one, I was leaning simply towards king/religious leader, not the actual God. Nice
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Oldrac...

Really, your awesome knows no bounds. I'm So so glad the way you used my hook. Just so very happy right now. Thank you.
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Asherian wrote:Oldrac...

Really, your awesome knows no bounds. I'm So so glad the way you used my hook. Just so very happy right now. Thank you.
I am glad you approve!

(Also, I'm glad you brought in another character. I think we were about due, but I didn't have any good ideas.)
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Yeah I'd noticed the lack.. I feel Lucien will provide us with Ample opportunities for expansion and more characters.
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You're a douchebag, Oldrac. Ending your section with a comma is seriously not cool. Also I'm passing because I can't think of anything interesting.
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I didn't see it as a problem, since it was already a speech area, obviously just a continuation of the sentence to Suga'bug.

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I guess my real issue is that I don't know how to write for a Southern Gentleman. I am assuming that he is one of the monied Cajun types? Because I'm reading him with a faint Cajun accent.
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Southern gentlemen are quite easy to write for, just put in a lot of references to killing servants and going fox hunting.

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