Michelle's Bad Day (discussion)

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I didn't so much pass as completely didn't realize it was my turn.

That being said, I'm not sure how to follow it either, great piece Kimra.
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Uhh-- I have an idea. Mind if I have a go?

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By all means, take it. We'll count it as taking your turn after Ash, I guess.
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Cool, I start school on Wednesday so I'll have it down before then. Getting an idea is the hard part but I think I already have that down.

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I think the turns system might be unnecessary at this point, so long as people announce their intention to write the next section before they start writing it.
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Oldrac the Chitinous wrote:No, no, it's just too tough of an act to follow, see.
You're nice. :)
If it's tough to follow it's only because I didn't actually lead up to any sort of cliffhanger. Cliffhangers are the easiest to follow. :wink:
Oldrac the Chitinous wrote:I think the turns system might be unnecessary at this point, so long as people announce their intention to write the next section before they start writing it.
Yeah, I think this might be a better option. But maybe also make sure no-one posts without a two person gap between them, or some people who want to post may miss out.
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I am earnestly, deeply saddened I didn't show up on time to contribute*, but that is more than made up for by the sheer awesome** quality of the writings I am seeing.

I'll try to be more reliable from this point on.

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***Is it weird that this is always my go-to excuse? And what kind of rehab do I suppose I need anyway?
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Okay, I don't want to take too much time so I posted it today. I'm sorry about the length... And the accent... And anything else I probably should've done better. Whoops!

EDIT: Damn, I'm still fixing bits. Maybe I should've waited to post it until after work tomorrow, when I had thought it through (instead of at 5 in the morning in my delirious insomnia). I don't think I can fix it anymore when people start reading it, unfortunately. Thus is the penalty for being sloppy.

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Well done LR. And with much more promptness than I managed.
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Ooh, I like the way this appears to be going!

If there are no strong objections, I'll do the next entry, sometime tonight after I'm done with classes.
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Oldrac the Chitinous wrote:Ooh, I like the way this appears to be going!

If there are no strong objections, I'll do the next entry, sometime tonight after I'm done with classes.
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Status: Insufficient consciousness for writing.
Will resume tomorrow.
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Well I've finally taken the time to read your story and the discussion. I have found it quite entertaining. I think I'd like to jump into the fray at some point in the near future.
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Soon I will read it and demand to take part. But I don't want to read it yet.

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