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The Spanish Gazelle

PostPosted: Wed Jun 13, 2012 7:08 pm
by Salacious Schoolmate
I've started writing horror fiction, in a story entitled the Spanish Gazelle. You can read the first part here.

edit: The second part is here.

edit 2: The third part is here

Re: The Spanish Gazelle

PostPosted: Thu Jun 14, 2012 11:58 am
by Apocalyptus
I like how you interweave a subtle tone of dread throughout the story. Very deft.

Re: The Spanish Gazelle

PostPosted: Thu Jun 14, 2012 1:46 pm
by Salacious Schoolmate
The terror marches inexorably forwards. These characters, these men I have created, they don't know what awaits them.

And it is not just they that will be terrified! It is you!

Re: The Spanish Gazelle

PostPosted: Thu Jun 14, 2012 11:01 pm
by Apocalyptus
I am horrified watching these people go about their daily lives, unable to warn them of the terror that awaits them!

Re: The Spanish Gazelle

PostPosted: Thu Jun 14, 2012 11:16 pm
by Salacious Schoolmate
Alright I'm going to write the third part now, but be warned! There will be an instance of horror in this episode of the story. A slight breeze of horror, but it tells of hurricanes to come!

Re: The Spanish Gazelle

PostPosted: Thu Jun 14, 2012 11:27 pm
by Apocalyptus
Okay I'll try my best not to faint while reading it. If I do and have some sort of horrendous head injury, I'm holding you fiscally responsible.

Re: The Spanish Gazelle

PostPosted: Thu Jun 14, 2012 11:50 pm
by Salacious Schoolmate
Here's part three. We have moved from one to two on the horror graph. However this graph is an exponential one, and as we progress we shall wish we were back here, back at two.