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Detritus

Postby Asherian » Fri Jan 29, 2010 6:25 am

Staring into the abyss that was her life Rachelle just tried to remember where it all went wrong. Ever since that night last March everything had just spiraled out of control, and to think, at the time it seemed a fantastic idea. Thinking back she still had to fight the smile, even knowing the horrors that night had visited on her, on more then her, she couldn't bring herself to regret him. With a sigh she tried to forget his touch upon her flesh, and starring out over the steel gray sea, get back to the job at present. She grabbed the spear, pulling it out of the sticky flesh already gone cold, heaving it over her shoulder she continued down main street, what was left of it. Moving through the wreckage Rachelle kept her eyes out for the glint of metal in the lowering evening sun, hoping to find dinner before she had to hole up for sunset.
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Re: What's new?

Postby Asherian » Fri Jan 29, 2010 6:29 am

<eventual update>
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Re: Cooking Experiments!

Postby Asherian » Fri Jan 29, 2010 6:31 am

<eventual update>
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Re: Satan

Postby Asherian » Fri Jan 29, 2010 6:33 am

Thinking about it she could still feel his arms wrapped around her, the slightly salty musky scent of him, the storm that lit his eyes.
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Re: The weather outside!

Postby Asherian » Fri Jan 29, 2010 6:37 am

With a sigh she tried to forget his touch upon her flesh, and starring out over the steel gray sea, get back to the job at present.
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Re: Make SMBC less funny.

Postby Asherian » Fri Jan 29, 2010 6:42 am

She grabbed the spear, pulling it out of the sticky flesh already gone cold, heaving it over her shoulder she continued down main street, what was left of it.
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Re: Revenue

Postby Asherian » Fri Jan 29, 2010 6:52 am

Moving through the wreckage Rachelle kept her eyes out for the glint of metal in the lowering evening sun, hoping to find dinner before she had to hole up for sunset.
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Re: Revenue

Postby Cirtur » Fri Jan 29, 2010 7:36 am

wat
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Re: Revenue

Postby Kimra » Fri Jan 29, 2010 8:07 am

She seems to be writing a story, spread across every thread...
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Re: Revenue

Postby LordRetard » Fri Jan 29, 2010 8:09 am

It's the newest viral sensation since Space-AIDS.
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Re: Revenue

Postby Kimra » Fri Jan 29, 2010 12:44 pm

I'd do it too, but I have far too much integrity as an unaccomplished writer to do anything so accomplished.
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Re: Do you want a thread about lesbian sex?

Postby Lethal Interjection » Fri Jan 29, 2010 1:59 pm

Asherian wrote:Staring into the abyss that was her life Rachelle just tried to remember where it all went wrong.


Have you been drinking?
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Re: Do you want a thread about lesbian sex?

Postby Apocalyptus » Fri Jan 29, 2010 2:25 pm

Or not drinking?
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Re: Revenue

Postby Oldrac the Chitinous » Fri Jan 29, 2010 4:01 pm

Asherian wrote:Moving through the wreckage Rachelle kept her eyes out for the glint of metal in the lowering evening sun, hoping to find dinner before she had to hole up for sunset.

Clearly, Rachelle is a Rust Monster.
Police said they spent some time working out if they could charge the man with being armed with a weapon, as technically he was armed with part of a fish.
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Re: Revenue

Postby Cirtur » Fri Jan 29, 2010 4:31 pm

Isn't that just a Water Golem?
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